domingo, setembro 03, 2006

Chapter 1 - Alone...Not anymore..

It was quiet outside..she was listening to the darkness around her..the crows were there..the wind was whispering cold words..the mist was full of silence, memories..
She couldn´t move..she felt stuck in her bed..wandering how to escape but feeling so peaceful inside...
Her sheets uncovered part of her innocent body, untouchable to the eager minds of the ones she was avoiding, her fear was part of her, like a scar in her heart..
She couldn't sleep..it was the third day she was like this..
All happened after she saw her best friend disappearing in the night, with some ghosts she didn't knew..she felt alone..alone in a world she didn't recognize as hers..
The clock was ticking..faster and faster..the time passed, hours, days..and she never left her bed..
Her dreams were vanishing beneath her skin..she felt weak, she was waiting for something she couldn't explain..
"vvvv...vvvvv.."Her phone was moving..who could it be..she was alone, and it wasn't after 25 years, anyone would remember her...
"It's me Peter..remember me? So do you still live in that little room? how are you doing?"- he asked..
But she didn't answer..she was listening carefully, with her heart open to the sound of his voice..
"Hello.. is it you..i am hearing you breath.." - said Peter carefully wandering what happened..
She released her soul.."hi"-she replied..her body trembled as she spoke..time passed, and it was the first word she spoken for a while...
She listened to his story without saying another word..she didn't care about her, about anyone..just wanted to be alone, just a little more..in her room, warm, safe and peaceful..But her heart was thinking otherwise....

4 comentários:

Anónimo disse...

Oix! Parexe k ja sou comentadora habitual! lool não sei pk mx gosto + deste blog do k o outro k tinha no blog.com! mx prontos...
texto mt linduh, se krx k t diga, eu gostei mt! mt.... profundo! axu k e a palavra certa!

**Strange Kisses**

Anónimo disse...

Que dominio de inglês! Rss
Gostei... Gosto de textos descritivos assim, deu pra lembrar algumas coisas que já aconteceram...
Obrigada pela visita!
Bjks

Anónimo disse...

Olá meu querido e inspirado amigo! K dizer...belo, inquietante, digno dum mestre. Obrigado pela tua incontestável amizade. Obrigado pelas tuas palavras nos meus cantitos. I Wish you at least a surprising and peaceful week, with all the blessings and joy existing in this world. A big and sincere kiss with all the friendship and tenderness.

Ana disse...

Nem sempre quando estamos sós é por opção. às vezes esperamos para que a pessoa certa chegue...se é que isso existe. Beijinhos